Great advice. The one critique of my first book that stands out for me is reader after reader asked me what date it was because they missed the context clues. So they were shocked to read of a truck showing up in a scene. I had obviously lost them. The next book has specific dates and locations preceding each section. But your suggestion here is a much more nuanced way of doing it. Thanks for the great advice.
Great advice. The one critique of my first book that stands out for me is reader after reader asked me what date it was because they missed the context clues. So they were shocked to read of a truck showing up in a scene. I had obviously lost them. The next book has specific dates and locations preceding each section. But your suggestion here is a much more nuanced way of doing it. Thanks for the great advice.